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Son Gohan and Gyu-mao’s Training; A Dragon Ball Fanfic by Rogafufuken
Topic Started: May 22 2014, 01:53 AM (2,095 Views)
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Here is the First chapter of the fanfic:

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This is the first fanfiction that I written. I am not really a good writer in general IMO, but I decided to try.

So is it good? Any constructive criticism?

Edit: I read the rules to the section again, and I think it might be in need to be moved to the normal Fanworks scetion, Depending on how the Fanfic Zone works.
Edited by Rogafufuken, May 22 2014, 02:12 AM.
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I really like the direction that this is heading. So is this story going to focus on the background of Son?
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May 22 2014, 01:56 AM
I really like the direction that this is heading. So is this story going to focus on the background of Son?
Yeah, and Gyu-mao's in a few chapters as well. Though mainly on Gohan's backstory.
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You have me intrigued. This is an area that very few people visit, so it is nice to see someone writing about it.
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I will probably try to make a new chapter weekly, if I can. It will depend on the week though.
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I liked it. Interesting that you go for Gohan's past.
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Update:

I have been having a writer's block of sorts recently, and I've been busy, so I have decided to wait unit my schools gets out to write Chapter 2.

It should be out in 2 weeks, however it could come out earlier though.
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After weeks of procrastination, it's here-

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It's not as long as the first chapter, and it's kind of filler, though I hope you enjoy it.

Comment on what you think about it.

Also, mods, I think this should be moved just to the normal Fanworks section.
Edited by Rogafufuken, Jul 3 2014, 01:47 AM.
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Moved the topic.

And very good chapter, I like the prospect of Gohan wanting revenge on his father. Excited to see how he goes about these emotions.
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The new chapter is here:

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What do you think about it?

Edited by Rogafufuken, Jul 10 2014, 02:18 AM.
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Wow, this is good. I too like the direction that this is going. It' really awesome to see some background of Son Gohan before he became Grampa Gohan. Heck yeah. I'm tuned in. Hooked. I hope this continues.
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Jul 13 2014, 03:20 PM
Wow, this is good. I too like the direction that this is going. It' really awesome to see some background of Son Gohan before he became Grampa Gohan. Heck yeah. I'm tuned in. Hooked. I hope this continues.
I'm glad to here that I have another fan.

I try to make them weekly, usually on Wednesday.

Sometimes it might be every other week though.
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Here is the new chapter:

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How do you guys like it?
Edited by Rogafufuken, Jul 24 2014, 03:49 AM.
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Anyone?
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Haha, nice chapter. I like to imagine who they both raise later on in the future.

They're about to train under Roshi. And they thought 5:45 was early. Lol. I'm ready to see how the training will go. I wonder if they have to earn their training.
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